Not So Inspiring Sans Teleprompter?
The Weekly Standard has a fascinating story by Dean Barnett that I haven’t seen anywhere else.
It describes a wanting performance of Sen. Barack Obama, D-Illinois, when he spoke at the Virginia Democratic Party’s Jefferson-Jackson dinner Saturday night and didn’t have the benefit of a Teleprompter.
(NOTE: Poster Tom J. has provided a link to the speech, that you can watch HERE. Check it out for yourself and see if you agree with Barnett. Thanks, Tom.)
"Shorn of his Teleprompter, we saw a different Obama," Barnett writes. "His delivery was halting and unsure. He looked down at his obviously copious notes every few seconds throughout the speech. Unlike the typical Obama oration where the words flow with unparalleled fluidity, he stumbled over his phrasing repeatedly."
Barnett writes for a conservative magazine, but he is an admirer of Obama’s oratorical gifts.
And the observation – which I have not seen anywhere else – gets at what could be a real vulnerability for Obama. Take it from a TV reporter, speaking with a Teleprompter and speaking without one are not remotely the same thing.
Teleprompter skills are not debate skills, they are not press conference skills, they are not personal communications skills.
Barnett writes that the lack of a Teleprompter "revealed Obama as a markedly inferior speaker… Virtually every time Obama deviated from the text, he expressed the partisan anger that has so poisoned the Democratic party. His spontaneous comments eschewed the conciliatory and optimistic tone that has made the Obama campaign such a phenomenon…
"The pressing question that Obama’s decidedly uninspiring Jefferson-Jackson oratory raises is which Obama is the real Obama–the one who read beautifully crafted words from a Teleprompter after his victory in Iowa, or the tediously angry liberal who improvised in Virginia?"
Consider that this is a conservative source, of course. But it’s interesting. What do you think?
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It’s nonsense. I saw Obama go for 54 minutes without notes, written speech, etc with just a hand-held microphone walking around the stage in Hartford and he got 17 standing ovations. There is a difference between a major speech (i.e scripted, Teleprompter) and stump speech, which is more akin to what Obama did at the JJDAY Dinner.
Posted by: dan | February 12, 2008, 11:40 am 11:40 am
Sour Grapes?
Posted by: Chuck | February 12, 2008, 11:43 am 11:43 am
I knew it.
Posted by: Noah | February 12, 2008, 11:44 am 11:44 am
Wha? I saw Obama’s speech & Clintons and I have no idea where this is coming from. Did he do as well as with a TP – no, especially at first but a)he did better then 90% of the pols I have ever seen give speeches and b)he still ran circles and circles around Ms Clinton. It was good that they scheduled her more than an hour before his speech.
To be fair, she gave a good speech, but not remotely in the same league as Obama.
Hence my confusion over this assessment.
Posted by: carrie | February 12, 2008, 11:46 am 11:46 am
Would be great to see that video. Anybody got a link for it? He certainly hasn’t had a script for his debate appearances and he’s come through as calm, conciliatory, and more than anything… healing. And, I’m convinced that it is this need in the country for healing, to which he is so brilliantly speaking. And, the key to that success, his success, thus far has been how comfortably, and sincerely, even gleefully, he reaches across his own party’s line to Independents and Republicans, while at the same time clearly declaring his own principles. As much blame as there is to go around for the dreadful polarization that has afflicted our nation for well over a decade now, I think it would be fair to say that one could lay 72% of that blame at the feet of Hillary and Bill Clinton. Name one state that Hillary can possibly win that John Kerry didn’t? I don’t think there is one. And as there are none, and any wise democrat knows that, Senator Obama is emerging clearly as the logical and prudent choice for the democrats.
Posted by: Thank God for Karma | February 12, 2008, 11:47 am 11:47 am
Obama has only speech template:
Blah blah blah HOPE, blah blah CHANGE blah blah HOPE OF CHANGE blah blah blah blah I HATE HILLARY blah blah America….
No WONDER Reagan is his role model. Soon all of his speeches will begin with “Well, my fellow Americans…”
Posted by: Noah | February 12, 2008, 11:50 am 11:50 am
HELLOOOOO…. this is just the teensiest taste of how the Republicans are going to tear this younster to shreds, should he be the Democratic nominee. Face reality, quickly.
Posted by: Charlene Whitney | February 12, 2008, 11:50 am 11:50 am
I must admit, I am disappointed to find out that the inspiring speeches by Barack Obama are read off a Teleprompter and are written by someone else.
Posted by: Patty | February 12, 2008, 11:54 am 11:54 am
Come on, you’re going to start referencing that Neocon rag the weekly standard? Has that guy seen George W. Bush speak lately? With or without a teleprompter? The right-wing tactic of trying to turn the opponent’s strengths into a weakness aren’t going to work this time. I take that back; they might work if reliable sources like ABCNews start referencing the Weekly Standard as a legitimate news source. Seriously, are you going to start linking to “High Times” when they criticize the GOP?
I live in Chicago and have heard Obama speak to groups large and small on three or four occasions, long before he was running for president. The guy is an intellectual heavyweight and has full command of the language, unlike the current resident of the white house. He’s the real deal, so the hit men on the right are going to start talking about the way he looks behind closed doors where nobody can prove them wrong.
Posted by: Dick C | February 12, 2008, 11:56 am 11:56 am
This is such non-sense. I saw the Virginia speech as it was being delivered live. Is he better with a teleprompter? Sure, who isn’t? And has this writer even seen a Democratic debate? There have only been, what 72 of them. Obama has done fine every time. I just saw him yesterday at the U of MD Comcast Center before a crowd of 20,000. He spoke for 45 minutes without notes or teleprompter and was phenomenal. Yes, its a “stump speech”, but he had the audience eating out of his hand. I’d take this over McCain or Hilary any day!
Posted by: Mike | February 12, 2008, 11:58 am 11:58 am
Ya think? Gee I never would have guessed! The man is a figment of the media’s imagination. He does not have the skills to be President of the US.
Posted by: s.b. | February 12, 2008, 12:01 pm 12:01 pm
I agree w/ the above poster as well.. I was on hand for a stump speech as well and there wasn’t a teleprompter in site..
And to rebuff the above mentioned article he mentions Obama going off his speech when talking about brownie/libby/rove.. but those who follow his speeches know that it is a staple of all of his stump speeches..
Posted by: blendahtom | February 12, 2008, 12:05 pm 12:05 pm
I agree with DickC’s comments above. Interesting story, yes, but extremely suspect as an impartial journalistic source. After I read Mr. Barnett’s account, I had to ask myself if he or the company he works for have any axes to grind or any ideological differences with the subject of his piece. The answer: OF COURSE they have axes to grind, since he works for “The Weekly Standard,” one of the most extreme right-wing publications of our times, and OF COURSE they have ideological differences with the subject of their piece. So, if Mr. Barnett wishes to write about his personal reactions to a candidate and what he himself thinks about the candidate’s oratorical style, he should be intellectually honest and label his work as “commentary,” and not reportage.
Posted by: chuck | February 12, 2008, 12:06 pm 12:06 pm
It is pretty amazing that Obama’s oratory skills fall short without the teleprompter. Perhaps this is why he is so bad at debates…wonder how he would do in debates opposed with McCain?
Posted by: Eric | February 12, 2008, 12:10 pm 12:10 pm
One more thing, anyone recall John McCain sans teleprompter after New Hampshire?
“My friends, my friends, my friends, my friends, my friends…”
And yet Tapper imagines Obama having trouble against him?
Posted by: Attaturk | February 12, 2008, 12:16 pm 12:16 pm
I think Obama does well in debates. Other than that one comment about Clinton being “likable enough,” where has he ever stumbled?
By contrast, Clinton has had some major problems in debates, even on substantive policy issues: her bizarre answer re Iraq and the Levin Amendment; her bizarre answer re drivers licenses for illegals; her claim to have been glad the bankruptcy bill failed, even though she voted for it; her inability to say how she would enforce her healthcare mandate; her obvious tactic of responding to a critical question by posing a critical question about Obama; and her suggestion that Obama was naive for being willing to talk to our enemies.
Everyone knows it’s easier to give a prepared speech, and every speaker does better with a teleprompter (hello – that’s why everyone uses them).
Posted by: Vote4BO | February 12, 2008, 12:25 pm 12:25 pm
Harvard Law, Harvard Law Review, experienced trial attorney, social advocate, U.S. Senator……problems with public speaking? I think not.
Posted by: dano | February 12, 2008, 12:39 pm 12:39 pm
Jake, did you actually watch the speech? I just don’t see what you’re talking about. Thanks to Tom J for posting the link so we could see for ourselves. It’s frustrating to hear and read so many lies and innuendo.
Posted by: Louie | February 12, 2008, 12:49 pm 12:49 pm
HELLOOOO is right. I agree with Patty. This is just more of the same Republican mudslinging, and unfortunately, just the tip of the iceberg regarding future lies, distortions, political games, etc, that Obama will have to endure. We have all witnessed similar lies, lies and more lies from the Bush administration for the past eight years, and it will only get more brutal since they realize that the world is now on to all their lying and deceitful ways. Obama should be able to win at the ballot box this year (hands down), but what about all those illegal ballot boxes? We need to all demand accountability and honesty in order to solve the world’s woes — global climate change, hunger, poverty, recession, war and talk of war. Go git ‘em, Senator Obama!
Posted by: Melanie | February 12, 2008, 12:52 pm 12:52 pm
Republicans destroyed this country
$8 Trillion of the $9 Trillion in debt is because of Reagans and Bushs
Posted by: THE TRUTH | February 12, 2008, 1:05 pm 1:05 pm
I could not agree more. I watched both speeches that night and Sen. Clinton’s speech was far more superior, inspiring and exuded a “hope” based in the geo-political realities of our time.
Posted by: billy j roderick | February 12, 2008, 1:15 pm 1:15 pm
It has been obvious in the debates. He sounds like a car that does not want to start. He is not smooth like a TV anchor. Forget about the poll McCain will banish this amature. I am a Dem. going Rep. To risky to test someone in the White House.
Posted by: Carlos | February 12, 2008, 1:21 pm 1:21 pm
Um, that was pretty much his stump speech, something he does many times a week without a teleprompter. I’m going with the obvious explanation of “it was late and campaigns are exhausting.”
Posted by: Tony | February 12, 2008, 1:22 pm 1:22 pm
I watched the speech in question and yes he stumbled here and there and in places was halting rather than smooth.
It was fatigue, nothing more or less. He has given numerous of speeches and talks sans teleprompter which were smooth and without stumbling disproving the allegation that it’s all about the teleprompter.
It was fatigue. Folks don’t want to agree that’s fine, we can disagree without being disagreeable. Fact is Obama has given many a speech just fine without a teleprompter.
Posted by: korey | February 12, 2008, 1:23 pm 1:23 pm
I think his a lot like Bush, I mean the way he talks, his torturing to the ears .The stutering is very anoying.
Posted by: Charles | February 12, 2008, 1:29 pm 1:29 pm
I think that the issues of teleprompters and Obama’s oratorical skills are easily checked by reviewing other speeches where he had no teleprompter. If he’s done well in other places without a teleprompter, then we can assume that the Virgina J&J speech was due to fatigue. If he’s done poorly everytime he’s without a teleprompter, it means that he’s not as gifted and spontaneous as everyone believed.
How about some good old-fashioned journalism? This issue can be easily checked by ABC News staff.
Posted by: Bruce | February 12, 2008, 1:35 pm 1:35 pm
No changing the rules in the middle of the game.
Democratic National Committee Chairman Howard Dean must be prepared to deliver that message to Sen. Hillary Clinton and her allies.
With a razor-thin delegate margin separating them and ever-fewer states left on the campaign calendar, Clinton and Sen. Barack Obama are working all angles to get to 2,025 – the number needed to win their party’s presidential nomination.
Source: NY Post
Posted by: femogiga | February 12, 2008, 1:59 pm 1:59 pm
Not enough angry Obamabots for today’s posts. Where are you all, ’cause some guy actually wrote something somewhat negative about your god today. Destroy him! Hey, got an idea to help you out, why not blame Hillary? Heck why not throw in Bill and the daughter as well? Gotta be their fault Barnett wrote stuff like that.
Posted by: Wil | February 12, 2008, 2:14 pm 2:14 pm
I thought the speech was really good. I think that all humans fumble lines in their speeches (see George W. Bush). I also think that this doesn’t change my vote.
Obama ’08
P.S. Somebody needs to analyze the way Senator Clinton always bugs her eyes and starts kind of yelling when she is really bringing home a point. Also, her tendency to nod her head as if agreeing with herself. It kind of bugs me! :)
Posted by: nobody's fool | February 12, 2008, 2:20 pm 2:20 pm
Please post an update noting the following false statement in Barnett’s piece:
“At one point, Obama launched an improvised jeremiad against the current administration that took special note of the recent revelation that he and Dick Cheney are distant relations”
The quoted paragraph that then follows has been part of Obama’s standard stump speech since Iowa, as could have been easily discovered with a 10 second search on Google, YouTube, or Obama’s web site.
Please don’t give partisan hacks like Barnett legitimacy by quoting and linking to their hit pieces uncritically.
Posted by: DarrenG | February 12, 2008, 3:49 pm 3:49 pm
I think that Weekly Standard column was the result of Dean Barnett’s disappointment that Mitt Romney dropped out. Dean was a Mitt supporter for years and years, and I suspect he’s been feeling a bit eeyore-ish lately. It happens. Maybe someone will send him a Pooh bear and some brownies to help him feel better. Whatever works.
Posted by: Tom J | February 12, 2008, 4:51 pm 4:51 pm
i’ve heard obama answer questions during the “meet and greets” he does for his constituents in dirksen (for those of you who don’t know where that is, it’s a senate building in d.c.). he is terrible. no real answers, no real substance. it’s absurd this guy has been able to get this far– people seriously need to get a grip and actually listen to what he says instead of saying they feel inspired. because inspiration, you know, won’t work to get people health care or end the mess that is washington if the “inspiring” person has no credible record or history of doing anything at all.
thanks jake for pointing out to all these people that obama is not god. if you really want to know how obama really works, just go to one of those constituent breakfasts. you’ll see that all he does is ride on dick durbin’s coattails, which isn’t a bad choice at all…
Posted by: what a bunch of fools | February 12, 2008, 4:51 pm 4:51 pm
Jake:
I agree! When Obama is delivering a speech that he has memorized or one that is spoon-fed via teleprompter he sounds pretty good, unless you’ve heard the crap a thousand times like I have-in which case you can probably deliver it about as well as he does.Anyway, watch him think on his feet and you will indeed watch him think—he is all “uhms” and “ahs,” delivered in a halting, sleep-inducing monotone. Watch the 60 minutes interview (zzzzz…). I’ve often noticed it in his debate performances and when he responds to audience questions. This is just one of many ways that the man does not match the hype. He sure does not “Barack my world” as he reportedly does for so many. I suspect that Barack fatigue is about to set in. If people really think about it, they will remember that this election is not a concert–we need to pick a president, not a Barack star.
Posted by: NJH | February 12, 2008, 4:58 pm 4:58 pm
Barnett’s piece is complete nonsense, and the sort of incompetent, unprofessional, and sloppy “reporting” we’ve all become used to these days. Take, for example, the language from the speech that he quotes as evidence of “partisan anger,” which he claims Obama would utter when he deviated from the text far removed from the lofty language he has so far been using during the campaign. THis is ridiculous and patently false. The supposed “angry” language that Obama used is language he has been using in perhaps 1/3 or more of his speeches, going at least all the way back to November 2007 (e.g., check out his “One Year From Today” speech from late last year, which you can find on Youtube). Futhermore, I can’t believe Barnett can be as dimwitted as he’s making himself out to be: Obama’s line about his cousin Cheney has nothing to do with anger, but is simply designed to be (and taken by everyone else in the world other than Barnett) a joke. In fact, in some cases, when making this joke, he adds that “everyone has a black sheep in the family. The other so-called “angry” lines he quotes are, of course, partisan (isn’t this about an election after all), but they are also nothing new in his speeches (see same “One Year” speech), contrary to this nonsense from Barnett. In any event, they are not spoken out of anger, as Bartnett’s overactive imagination tells him, but are simply designed so that the troops will be “fired up and ready to go.” Obama generally reserves these lines for more partisan audiences, rather than when his speech is intended for a broader audience (such as a victory speech). Finally, while he was was visibly looking at notes for this speech, his speech was not significantly more halting than his typical speech. It is true that his delivery is not always at the same level, even when he not visibly looking at notes. Very often he gives speeches and it is obviously that he’s fatigued. What is truly amazing is that he’s able to perform at such a high level after frequently getting only three hours of sleep.
Posted by: Charles | February 12, 2008, 5:25 pm 5:25 pm
What us non-cult members know already. What America will find out by November.
Posted by: geevill | February 12, 2008, 5:50 pm 5:50 pm
This is clearly an attempt to gratuitously knock Obama down a notch.
I saw the speech in its entirety, and while I noted that Obama was looking at his notes and going off text more, I thought the speech was good. Of course it wasn’t quite as seamless as when he has a teleprompter. But in some respects, that made it seem more personable and spontaneous.
Obama does have a tendency to occasionally to pause when he is speaking extemporaneously, which admittedly is not the best speaking habit. It’s one reason he doesn’t do as well in debates. In general he likes to be measured and precise in what he says, preferring well-rounded perspectives to snappy sound bites.
Overall, speeches and debates are not the end in themselves. It’s not so much important who wins on “points” as to which candidate convinces the electorate that they would make the better President and leader for our nation.
Posted by: Gene L | February 12, 2008, 6:05 pm 6:05 pm
You can already see it in his past debates with Clinton. Whereas Clinton seamlessly appears to know what the hell she is talking about and can drown you in policy details, Obama is forever stuttering and trying to come up with something worthwhile to say. He gives me the impression of George Bush trying to say something intelligent.
Posted by: Joseph | February 12, 2008, 6:09 pm 6:09 pm
“Overall, speeches and debates are not the end in themselves. It’s not so much important who wins on “points” as to which candidate convinces the electorate that they would make the better President and leader for our nation.”
and Obama has given us NOTHING except speeches.
Posted by: geevill | February 12, 2008, 6:09 pm 6:09 pm
Not at all surprised. But there are a lot of us who knew Obama before he became the Messiah of today.
Posted by: irma | February 12, 2008, 6:13 pm 6:13 pm
Over a year of watching, I agree that Obama is not as great without the teleprompter as with. This is a stylistic rather than substantive problem, after all we’ve elected folks who can’t get out a full sentence (ie current White House idiot). The real problem is that his image is built on his ability to deliver sweeping oratory. Like it or not, the guy needs a media coach ASAP to get over this if he plans to score points in debates against McCain.
Posted by: edgery | February 12, 2008, 6:29 pm 6:29 pm
This article is right on…….I noticed how obama did really poorly in the debates—-he would hesitate, stutter, and then when he did speak, my friend (that I was watching the debates with) said that she couldn’t follow his train of thought—-his words were kind of jumbled all together and it isn’t clear what he was trying to get across. Hello, America!! Hillary is very strong in debates and she would out-debate McCain ANY day……
Posted by: Illinois for Hillary | February 12, 2008, 6:39 pm 6:39 pm
I saw what this writer is referring to and couldn’t decipher if it was a stutter or static. Hey maybe thats what our next debate should be about. On the spot surprise speeches. No teleprompter, no written speeches. Why you should be president in your own words? GO!!!
Mr Obama you are no JFK!!!!
Posted by: mona | February 12, 2008, 6:46 pm 6:46 pm
Thought I was reading the Onion at first.
Posted by: david | February 12, 2008, 9:14 pm 9:14 pm
Wow, what are you alking about? I think this blog is definitely biased. I watched the speech on TV, didn’t notice that there was no teleprompter, and thought it was more substantive than usual, which I was happy about.
Posted by: drill | February 12, 2008, 9:57 pm 9:57 pm
I’m not voting for a candidate on whether they can give a perfectly smooth speech while exhausted and without a teleprompter. Good grief! Are you so lacking in substantive issues that you resort to childish fluff like this, Jake?
I’m voting by how a candidate views the problems in the world, what processes they use to solve those problems and who they include in that process. I want results that doesn’t cost my appropriate pride in being an American so I am turning that page, however flawed and authentic it may be, with Obama.
Posted by: SE Croft | February 13, 2008, 7:02 am 7:02 am
Gee, Jake, seeing this within a few days of your buying into the “cult”idiocy that was being floated last week (really held Obama’s numbers down in VA-MD-DC, didn’t it?), I’m beginning to think the cheese is slipping off your cracker! The JJ speech was fine — more akin to the “stump speeches” I’ve seen him give at rallies, and certainly better than Clinton’s speech the same night.
I find her very hard to listen to; she has a tendency to shout and strain her voice and it’s not terribly effective. One of the best speeches I’ve seen her give was on Super Tuesday. It sounded as if it had been written by a different speechwriter and her delivery was very good, measured, almost graceful. And it looked like she was using — horrors! — a teleprompter. Let’s start talking about substance.
Posted by: jac13 | February 13, 2008, 8:07 am 8:07 am
Um, just wanted to say that I watched the video and I don’t agree at all with the assessment that he’s “much worse.” He looked down at his notes a couple times, but that’s fine. Very good speech.
Posted by: IMUnaware | February 13, 2008, 10:08 am 10:08 am
Watched the video. And yes, he is a terrible speaker without something in front of him.
As if his stumbling performance in the debates hadn’t already proven this.
Posted by: Bryan | February 13, 2008, 11:17 am 11:17 am
“Consider that this is a conservative source, of course. But it’s interesting. What do you think?” I think Jake Cutter has pwned himself. The comments demolish Barnett’s thesis, but there is a fine article at Media Matters* which shows that 1) The so-called hateful-liberal “improvisations” are part of Obama’s stock of speeches and 2) most media people know this. Why doesn’t Jake? Or does he? Why would anyone outside of Limbaugh’s audience take A Weekly Standard article as anything other than slanted and possibly untruthful?
Posted by: scraig46 | February 13, 2008, 2:57 pm 2:57 pm
If you are going tear the guy down, really go negative with him, can you not find something better than this? C’mon, get your opposition research going. Surely he mouthed off to an teacher in elementary school. Missed church on an occasion or two. Maybe was late with a library book. Innuendo and insinuation. That is all I have heard. Now this garbage about public speaking skills, have you heard our sitting President WITH a teleprompter? Have you listened to John McCain speak? At least argue a point on an issue or other wise get out of the way.
Posted by: Louis | February 13, 2008, 5:33 pm 5:33 pm
It’s NOT interesting, not even remotely. So he speaks better with a teleprompter. So what? Funny how brave you MSM people are now that a Democrat is in office after 8 years of toadying to Bush!
Posted by: patty knight | March 22, 2009, 4:09 pm 4:09 pm